Comments on: Why Google Why?! http://mouseclone.com/2007/personal/why-google-why Mouseclone is about life and what goes on in my eyes. Thu, 20 Nov 2008 12:37:49 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.1 By: Mouseclone http://mouseclone.com/2007/personal/why-google-why#comment-974 Mouseclone Mon, 24 Dec 2007 13:13:52 +0000 http://mouseclone.com/2007/personal/why-google-why#comment-974 Dustin: I will have to agree with your. My problem is that I have never done very well at English and the whole punctuation stuff. I excelled in Math, but that doesn't really matter when writing a blog and having readers does it. I reason I have for not knowing English better is just laziness. Although, I have improved over the past year because of writing this blog. I Should try and take a college English course, so that I could test myself. One day that may happen, for now I thank you for your comments and the English lesson. I also to the time to fix your suggestions. Dustin: I will have to agree with your. My problem is that I have never done very well at English and the whole punctuation stuff. I excelled in Math, but that doesn’t really matter when writing a blog and having readers does it.

I reason I have for not knowing English better is just laziness. Although, I have improved over the past year because of writing this blog. I Should try and take a college English course, so that I could test myself. One day that may happen, for now I thank you for your comments and the English lesson. I also to the time to fix your suggestions.

]]> By: Dustin Smith http://mouseclone.com/2007/personal/why-google-why#comment-969 Dustin Smith Sun, 23 Dec 2007 06:28:13 +0000 http://mouseclone.com/2007/personal/why-google-why#comment-969 You make some good points here, however, some proof-reading is in order if you wish the full effect to reach your readers. For example: "There are those that live for a great PR..." the indefinite article 'a' is not used with the acronym PR and the phrase should read: "There are those that live for great PR..." Also, "...then they will need to for over more than that." I think you meant to write 'fork' rather than 'for'. I don't want to be a dick about it, but I thought you might like to know that improper grammar and sloppy punctuation detract from a strong point. Cheers You make some good points here, however, some proof-reading is in order if you wish the full effect to reach your readers.

For example: “There are those that live for a great PR…” the indefinite article ‘a’ is not used with the acronym PR and the phrase should read: “There are those that live for great PR…”

Also, “…then they will need to for over more than that.” I think you meant to write ‘fork’ rather than ‘for’.

I don’t want to be a dick about it, but I thought you might like to know that improper grammar and sloppy punctuation detract from a strong point.

Cheers

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